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"Count on it," Victoria replied, kissing and hugging her, Jimmy's cum squishing between them and getting them sticky.
Once they broke apart, Victoria began to stroke her brother's dick slowly, sucking gently on the head as Janet sucked on her tits.
"I can't thank you enough for helping, sis..." Jimmy moaned, his dick hardening again in her mouth.
"Oh I'm sure you can find some way," Victoria replied with a smirk, sucking him back and sliding a finger in his asshole, making him gasp as he gripped her hair.
"OH FUCK!!!" he yelled in pleasure, his cock exploding in Victoria's mouth. She moaned, sucking and swallowing as her mouth was filled with his hot seed.
After what felt like an eternity, he ran dry, falling back on the couch and watching as Victoria and Janet began a long cum swapping kiss.
Jimmy grinned, seeing his dick was still rock. He knew it'd be still a while before Victoria returned home and he could barely wait to see all that would occur.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoMarshalMarmont1815
Not my favorite premise (I'm a big fan of sweet, saccharine sibcest) but a very hot story. Maybe a little disjointed in places, but still very enjoyable. 5*
Now, to another commenter:
Good God cageysea9725...You bitch about hate mail in your bio, and yet...I've read your comments, and they're all like this one. You're one of the biggest assholes on this site who is also capable of stringing a coherent sentence together! I enjoyed "Broken" and "Full Moon Over Tulsa" and I was really looking forward to reading the conclusion of "Broken" before you took it down (though I of course still have it, because I always download stories I like, just in case the site disappears, or something), but it's revealing to learn that you're just as much of a dick as the father in that story. (Can't remember his name right now, haven't read the story in a bit) No wonder you were clearly planning to have the father cuck his son with his daughter(s). Thank God you decided to be a vile, hypocritical coward, and write nasty comments instead of ruining that rather lovely (though certainly not perfect) story. I hope you find some happiness somehow in your life. How the... adequately capable...have fallen.
Lee2012over 2 years agoVictoria, Janet and Catherine weren’t really identified till well into your story. Off track a bit and too quick of a conversion of Janet
cageysea9725over 2 years agoDon't listen to the person who said you need an editor. You need a ghost writer. Editing would be too much work, even if you paid the going rate. You write like you have ADHD and can't help wandering off topic in the middle of almost every sentence, just to wander back later, before you put down a period.
I have a feeling the meandering would settle down if you just would take the time to read your own writing. I don't blame you though if you just can't stomach that task. I know I couldn't, but if you don't want to do the work necessary to write something that actually makes sense, then you shouldn't take that laziness out on unsuspecting readers. That's just rude.
LookOldButFeelYoungover 2 years agoYou really need an editor! The immediate turnabout by the fiance made no sense at all............ 3***
