All Comments on 'Passing Tides Ch. 01-05'

by MusicalMoth

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Anonymousover 5 years ago

When will the rest arrive?!

I'm absolutely hooked on this story so far. I find that so many erotic stories lack such fantastic introductions and descriptions, which this is certainly fulfils. I love the characters - Isla sounds so intimidating! Can't wait to see what happens to Josie next. I can live my fantasies through her..

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Fantastic story so far

I am loving this story so far, amazing descriptions and an interesting plot line that makes me want more. I want more ASAP.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Love Josie!

A good start!

Some characters could do with more attention but I’m in love with Josie!

More!

Anonymousover 5 years ago

More, sooner the better.

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Amateur writer. Here to learn story telling techniques and improve creative writing skills. Very open to feedback and critical analysis! My first story 'Passing Tides' has recently reached chapter 12, although I have only published the first five (and a pinch) chapters, I will...

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