by PorscheLynn
Very much worth the wait, a beautifully told, fully plausible and good old fashioned piece of hot writing. Most excellent. Thanks.
I liked it.
The build up was well done and I quite enjoyed the various stops along the way to the climax :)
The rating should be about 90% but the voting doesn't allow such precision.
Nice first story PorscheLynn, lots of very hot details that move the story along beautifully. I loved the rich use of language. Keep writing.
Cheers' rain
wow this is hot it had me going from half way down the first page and did not ease up right to the end,Content great and it was put together right. going to look at other stories by porshelynn now. many thanks.
Great story had me aroused early on and forced to take things in hand by the end. Please write more.