All Comments on 'Passion's New Home'

by PorscheLynn

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MeanElfMeanElfabout 20 years ago
Excellent, oh yes!

Very much worth the wait, a beautifully told, fully plausible and good old fashioned piece of hot writing. Most excellent. Thanks.

rgraham666rgraham666about 20 years ago
Good one

I liked it.

The build up was well done and I quite enjoyed the various stops along the way to the climax :)

The rating should be about 90% but the voting doesn't allow such precision.

herecomestherainherecomestherainabout 20 years ago
Well done

Nice first story PorscheLynn, lots of very hot details that move the story along beautifully. I loved the rich use of language. Keep writing.

Cheers' rain

rytonarytonaalmost 20 years ago
this is really good

wow this is hot it had me going from half way down the first page and did not ease up right to the end,Content great and it was put together right. going to look at other stories by porshelynn now. many thanks.

Jay318Jay318over 19 years ago
Passion

Great story had me aroused early on and forced to take things in hand by the end. Please write more.

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