All Comments on 'Pathways to Submission: Sally Pt. 01'

by RachaelJane

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GortmundyGortmundy10 months ago

Great story, well written and I look forward to seeing where it goes. I very much enjoyed that it didnt descent into the mindless hmm, "sadism" that happens in some stories and both characters appeared normal and humane enough that you can empathise and root for them if you will.

Ravey19Ravey1910 months ago

Promising start.

KatiwantsKatiwants10 months ago

Wonderful story!!! Very arousing!!

Wiz1002Wiz10029 months ago

I’m enjoying the start of this very promising series. I think Sally and Mistress Penelope are going to work wonderfully together.

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Thanks for reading my profile. What can I say about myself? In 2021, after writing fan fictions and other stories for several years I started writing erotica as a hobby. Some of the stories I've posted here are adult adaptations of earlier stories I've written. More recent ...