All Comments on 'Patience and Persistence'

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Omart57Omart57about 2 years ago

Very good story, Brad! I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice but you need an editor. "I never new my Father"

HornyXhosaHornyXhosaabout 2 years ago

Loved the story. Read through your story before publishing it - lots of typos that can be avoided.

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Just a guy who started writing as a release. Liked to read stories here and thought I would add my 2 cents. Some stories are real and mine and some are real and belong to others, and some are just made up while driving. Hope you enjoy.