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Click here"Go on baby." Patrick whispered fully understanding her nervousness. "Just look at me."
An hour later the service was over and they were headed to the cemetery. Patrick stood watch over Kevyn and Louise as the minister began the Lord's Prayer. Soon everyone including Patrick was reciting the prayer with him; he held Kevyn's hand in one and Louise's hand in the other as they approached the casket and placed flowers on it.
Patrick felt protective of Louise and he wasn't sure of why except that she looked so lost and afraid. "It will be alright." he assured her when they were standing back in their places.
Kevyn soon found out why so many came to the service, word had gotten out about where the repast was going to be. People were using her mother's funeral as a way to get a night out at a nice restaurant. She was furious as she heard the murmurings about the food served at the hotel restaurant.
"Don't worry about it." Patrick said, "It doesn't matter."
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Clay repeated his prayer for forgiveness several times and said the Lord's Prayer in earnest but even so, he hadn't changed his mind about Kevyn and Patrick. He headed to the car planning to go to the repast too. Something warned him that he should go home but he pushed the warning aside.
The dinner was over by nine with the family and Clay being the last to leave. Gene left a good ten minutes before anyone else in the family followed by Juliet and their brother then Louise then Clay with Patrick and Kevyn bringing up the rear. As soon as they were outside, Patrick tensed and shouted "DOWN!" as he grabbed Kevyn and pulled her into his body as he spun around.
The sound of a single gunshot echoed through the silence of the night immediately followed by a cry of deep pain.
You're literally mind raping me right now with the twists and turns of this story
you got me all twisted up in this story. I cant wait to see what happens next. Great Suspense.
Well done, and looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you,
M1
You did it again.... These cliffhangers are Driving Me Crazy.... Please, Please post the next chapter soon....
I am so incredibly addicted to this story. This story could have had no sex in it and I still would have been hanging on every single word. I have read this story 4 times...today! PLEASE update soon!
Damn Kal, you sure know how to write a cliffhanger- please, please,please give us some more asap!!
Happily addicted to this! The next chap couldn't come soon enough! Superb as always
I know the drama centers around "who shot J.R."....being facetious, but seriously; Patrick is a gem. You have depicted a lovingly sensitive man and he is with a sistah.
In the world, I wonder if people wonder for a minute that we might honestly want someone like that. My answer is a resounding YES!!!! Hell to the Yes!!!!!!..... My other question is where on this hellish planet is my Patrick????
This is my second read through of this chapter because of the way you pictured his loving her the way you did. Somehow this is doing a bit of a restoration in my thinking.
Hard these days to even think a man could care like that. Fantasy is lovely.
Thanks for sharing your creative vision.
Gene left before anyone else. Maybe he shot Clay?! Or....maybe he shot Puff who was trying to shoot Kevyn??! Dang it. Your stories are like crack. I refresh my mobile several times a day to see if you have a new chapter up!!!