All Comments on 'Pauline - Past, Present and Future'

Diana1957, you've posted a good first story. It is well-written and you have taken the time to create interesting characters. I am looking forward to the continuation.

Well written first story. I look forward to the next part.

Great first story,a little short but has potential.Please continue,I KNIW its gonna be a delicious series in the future👌🏽

Sorry for the typo in my last comment,I KNOW it's gonna be a great series..😉

Thanks to all of you with the positive feedback so far. This will help me get more into and bring out the next chapters.

Di x

A really good submission. Perhaps a little rushed at times. Looking forward to part two.

The characters are really well developed and I am excited to see where this leads.

This is so erotic, such a plausible context and building up really nicely. I look forward to the next chapter - thank you