All Comments on 'Pay Up'

Great story.Thanks for sharing. Frankie

Good story and consider second to last paragraph on page one needs editing unless cabbie was alien and had two cocks " fucks her tits and her ass".

Really sexy story! Keep up the great work!

I liked it. Keep writting

I love it but and gave you a 5 which is a rare rating from me. One thing, however, is why did she worry about him cumming in her the second time? That fear should have happened the first time.

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You started well and whats more you can write! However, you need to proof read to check for plot mistakes and frankly physical impossibilities.

In my opinion the story quickly descended into the same predictable durge.

It would be way more refreshing for the woman to turn the table on the man.... let's face it what 20 year old wouldn't have known to start her phone recording and then blackmailed the smugness out of him... and simply made him her whore.

if it's got a girls anus being fucked, i love it