All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 01'

What a nice take on an interesting era and a fascinating subject - feudalism. Look forward to see how things develop between Shahnawaz and Payal. Good sex!!!

That was a very good start, with good character development and impeccable language. Please keep going as I am sure all the readers till now are eager to see which paths the characters take during the course of the story. 5 stars!

This is a very interesting start MP. I know you have been working on this story for a while now. Can't wait to see how it proceeds. Best of luck.

There are very few writers from the subcontinent who write well and with much sensitivity and who with effortless accuracy describe the social environment, not to mention the individual problems of identity. MP is one of them and one wishes to see his stories more often. In any event the recent output is excellent and brings much joy to this reader

An old Indian

Indeed a very good start. Congratulations MP. Munda sahi hai. Looking forward to reading the rest.