All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 03'

An excellent continuation on the story. Want to see the servant girl and Payal feudal story lines develop. Keep it coming.

Can't wait for your next instalment. Excellent!

Superb addition. Only wish the story would be updated faster, other than that can't find a single fault with this one! Excellent 5*!

Mirror Mirror on the wall!!!!

Who's the hottest of em all? Iram, Shireen or Payal.

My vote goes to Shireen, but Payal seems to have the potential to easily best her.

fantabulous mate.. you rock n you sure know how to play with the words...

a few suggestion for a way forward ...

1. payal is taken by elder bro, n that results in couple leaving pakistan and settling abroad, say back to malaysia..

2. couple gets settled there, while payal's hubby is given responsibility to see business in the city, she gets to stay at village.. thus providing different windows of sexual awakening.. may one side involve bro in law n his friends at village and huby n city life on the other...

a few more... but then you r the boss n author n sure know how to take it forward...

but surely Payal has the scope to go a long series... she is hotter than Alexa and still romantic like Vania

Cheers

Farhan

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