All Comments on 'PayBack Ch. 03'

I must say I'm impressed. I like how you keep it with a hint of reluctance...but still have them act as wanton as they please. I eagerly await chapter 4.

Enjoying the series as it builds. Enjoy more watching you extend your writing skills as the story grows. Intriguing story with good imagination and tone.

It would be good if he knocked them all up... Kind of hard for the women to explain to their husbands, though...