All Comments on 'Paying the Cost'

It almost pissed me off. You got me. Excellent. Just the way life should be.

An actual story in LW about a real loving couple!

This must be backwards day or something lol.

Liked it.

Very sweet.

Nice Touch...good ending while I was ready to hate her!

I, for one, gave 5*; I loved it. In a sea of endless cuckold stories, this was a welcome oasis.

I swear to god I read this story a week or so ago. Is this a repost or some posting other authors stories. This is the second time this week. I commented on a story earlier this week and asked if it was a repost. What is going on here?

first of all thank you all who have read this story.. your encouraging feedback is most welcome. to the person of the last comment I will say that this is no repost. this is a fantasy that will never be played out, for the person it is written about left for another. it is not only a gift to them, but also a way to release the pain of our break up. there are three stories with the same theme( this one, rain rain stay, and healing-yet to be approved as of 11 july 13) but I assure you this story came from my mind and heart. I appreciate your time I reading it and if there is ever anything that I can write or share with all of you please don't hesitate to contact me on here.

The commenter who thought this was a re-post was confused because the basic story line has been done numerous times before, revealing the lover was the husband after all playing an erotic game within the marriage. That doesn't make this story any less entertaining.

Unlike those man/husband hating, cheating whore stories out there.

What about the call to the massage center advertised in the hotel room? And the rough lady's voice? If Sweetie really had made up a phony flyer, and called home, and Hubby's Mom answered, then this is unnecessarily elaborate. And would anyone ask a Mom or Mom-in-law to play along for a marital tryst fantasy? I don't think so...maybe just ask for an evening's parenting relief, but NOT an elaborate charade. And WHY would Hubby leave after the fantasy game played out?

Finally, if Sweetie lived close enough for Hubby to get to her hotel so quickly, WHY was she staying at a hotel, inconveniencing Mom, being away from her kids, and NOT having Hubby to sleep with until time to work the next morning? Totally implausible!

dear lickidee, I hope his finds you well. I see that you have some issues with the story and I feel obligated to defend my work again. first of all being a trained actor you learn how o commit to the role. what I mean by that is that if you are going to do something such as act out your wife's fantasy you need it to feel as authentic as possible to keep the excitement level high. why do anything to cheapen the experience? second if you have an open dialogue with your family, your parents know all to well what it takes to make a marriage successful. they would play a role however big or small. third he story states that she was a was away, but who wouldn't drive 2 hours to make the love of their lives fantasy come true? fourth, he would leave for the authenticity of the fantasy. who would pay a hooker for sex and then sleep next to them for rest of the evening? I wouldn't be able to sleep for fear of being robbed or worse. he leaves to preserve the integrity of the fantasy. the flier would be easily made, maybe fifteen minutes on your computer and then print. I truly thank you for reading the story and voicing your concern, and normally I would just let it roll off my back, but you accused me of lying, and felt the need to show the truth of it all. have a great day.

I liked this story very much. Well written and a very plausible plot You had me fooled for the first 3/4 of the story. I was believing this was just another worthless cheating slutwife story, but stuck with it and was pleasantly surprised. Good Work. This is what Loving Wife stories should be about. 5*.

While i thought the story was excellent, the only part I did not like was to involve the MIL to enact the fantasy. Could have just been a call to a random Massage Centre and give them a wrong room number and/or wrong Hotel.

The phone call threw me for a bit, and I still don't quite have it figured out, but I guess a friend could have been persuaded to help out. I did wonder if this was a fantasy role play when she compared the masseur to her husband. The "I love you" added to the suspicion, but I was never really sure until she called him Fredrick right near the end.

Great - more like it please!

Some true loving husband & wife erotic role playing fun with a little twist plus the kids got some Granny time. No cheating, just the "feel" and some out of town naughtiness only really known to the couple, very good. BRAVO!!

Story is almost as silly as author's comments.

Get a dictionary! A masseuse is a female and a masseur is a male.