All Comments on 'Paying The Rent Ch. 03'

Enjoyed seeing these characters again. I like what you are building with this series and will be down for whatever you put out on it going forward.

good start

I can’t wait for Lavon and Rachel to hook up! Or for Lavon to move to my neighbor hood. 😁

When Lavon and Rachel will hook up ?

Rachel's future will be becoming a BBC slut!

Like the writig so still gave it 5 stars and was totally excited by the chapter, but was let down with the time jump. Loved the build up in the first 2 and felt all my expectations were subverted in this chapter.

The time jump did not add to it - now we do not know how Britney did. Did she get pregnant or not?

At least one more chapter is needed with real preg risk sex involved once again.

The story has a mapped-out arc to play out over several chapters. I take your well-made points but in my opinion, from Rachel's viewpoint, we needed that time jump. Will we find out what happened to Britney? Now that woud be telling

Beautiful story. Please continue

Beautiful story. Please continue

More please.

Thanks for the interest. This story will be continued but probably that won't be until I have concluded 'Black and Blue.' I felt I needed to take a break from this one for a while but rest assured that I will return to it

What a beautiful story . Can’t wait for the next chapter

Great story as we’re left wondering what’s to become of Rachael but also Elize and Helen.