All Comments on 'Payment in Kind'

how horrible, both the husband and wife.

Just dumb!

That was pathetic

That’s rape in anyone’s language

Only person to like, even slightly, is the poor daughter of this miserable, pathetic pair of unfit parents.

I found nothing appealing about this story.

Submission is fun sometimes.

Coerced submission never is.

Neither is pretending step-something is incest. It's not.

This was basically sex-trafficking. Exchanging sex with an unwilling third party for financial gain is the plot here. Tell us this submission is anything but sex-trafficking.

Besides the adolescent writing and lack of creativity, that alone should humiliate you.

This was great! Ignore the haters!!! I’m always amazed at the people who get so indignant that you would write porn on a porn story site!! Before he kicks the mother to the curb you need a chapter 2 where he makes her eat his come out of her daughter’s cunt!!!

I'm pretty surprised with most of these comments. I mean, you'd expect porn with a plot twist on an erotica literature website... The incest comes from the fact that he's ducking a woman and her daughter who's also his step-daughter. Plot line is a bit rushed, there is coercion and non-consent, but once again I'll emphasise the "Erotica literature website" part of the whole thing.

Keep going Author, haters gonna hate while the rest of us masturbate.

Nice premise but you rushed it. Next time will be better!

Love it you are GOOD

Eh... it was ok. Quick, but the fast-paced style is nice sometimes. It was a little too dark for me, if he got the daughter on-board and treated her better it'd be much more appealing.

I appreciate the lack of obvious grammar and spelling mistakes.

4/5

This deserves a follow up!

What an asshole . . . .