All Comments on 'Payson's Wedding'

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formyqueenspleasureformyqueenspleasurealmost 5 years ago
wonderful Concept

I love the concepts and the visuals and emotions involved here. nicely presented.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
My Dream

I so dream of being a bride, wearing lots of lace. Wearing a bra with my breasts encased in lace. A tampon string in my lace panties.

300bowler300300bowler300almost 5 years ago
SUPER

GREAT STORY LINE, SO VERY HOT, HOPE THERE IS MORE TO TELL, ...! BETTY jo xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I love it!

I thought the story was amazing,I hope that there's a part 2 to tell!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Don’t wait too long to write Part 2!

Please publish a continuation of this hot story line!

trixie47cdtrixie47cdalmost 5 years ago
I liked the plot just fine, but...

Did I miss something, or is Becky the buxom Scandinavian blonde named Martinez?

Still a good read, but just the sort of continuity issues I have writing. Keep up the good work, hon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

grow some balls stupid men don't wear girls wedding rings or wear a bridal gown get the hell out while you have some dignity left next she will have you sucking men and they will be having sex with her and you will not RUN

SissyArleneSissyArlenealmost 5 years ago
Wow

What sissy doesn't dream of being the beautiful bride.

rdoolittlerdoolittlealmost 5 years ago
Another hit

Great imagery:"my quivering, balloon-knot of a hole". Made my day

cdCindy1cdCindy1almost 5 years ago
this gives me an idea

I'm a sissy CD gay husband (married to a woman) but I only want to be with men now. If and when I find a permanent boyfriend, I would love to be his bride, to wear his engagement ring and to walk down the aisle with everyone knowing that I'm a sissy gay bride. This is a dream of mine and maybe one day it will come true.

This story really turned me on. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
very exciting story

Thank you, I am enjoying your story so far and hope you will continue their adventure.

lawndartslawndartsover 3 years ago

I can't wait for Payson's bachlorette party; some Chippendale-type guy with a big cock is going to make a proper woman out of him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry gurls,sissies and other, this one is not for me. Jildijow.

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMiover 2 years ago

This is Absolutely Fabulous!!!!! Your stories are the Best!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Refuse to marry the bitch and toss your Mother out of your life. And when Becky traps him near the end? Bite the shit out of her and end the nonsense. This was poorly done.

ken2305ken23055 months ago

What a wonderful story wish it was me walking down the isle in a bridal dress

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