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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice little story

I thought her 180 degree turn inside of thirty (?) minutes was a bit too fast. Maybe after seeing her parents she would need a few days to process her emotions. I could see her turning around when or after the final video was presented and she had worked with him to put all the kisses together on screen.

Thanks for leaving out details of her breasts or his “25 cm cock”.

Nice first effort. Keep at it.

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Long time reader, frustrated writer, hoping to finally put pen to paper and have some fun while doing so.

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