by softer
That is a great start to a wonderful story!
I'm no expert, but I feel it is very well written. Please continue!
Like the writing. Loved the astronomer moon starter part and all your description. I'm a little fuzzy on Johnathan. Is he post op or a guy on hrt with a small dick? Great first story. Keep writing.
I very much enjoyed the astronomer moon starter anagram part. My brain ❤️ those. Great first story. Keep writing.