All Comments on 'Peak District Sexy Couple Swap'

"I cried out as my bulging helmet injected the final concentrated essence of my sexuality into this incredible woman." More stilted than one of those awful BeeLine novels of the 70's. Did you think they'd pay you for the word? LOL.

Thanks April. Really appreciate your kind words.

Cheers anon. You always have to take criticism from someone who doesn't have the courage to put their name to it with a pinch of salt, but it's always nice to be quoted!

I liked the story

Very well written

Another chapter after describing the girlfriend and the male would be good

Thank you anonymous. Really appreciate you taking the time to comment.