All Comments on 'Pearl Ch. 02'

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LustHoseLustHosealmost 14 years ago
A novel premise for a series

Rarely comment on stuff presented here but this is pretty good stuff.

No pun intended, but this Swarm thing has a lot of potential.

I was married to a very "Brainy" gal for over 20 years; I can easily relate to the "matter of fact" approach to Life as well as the vulnerability that the early taunting does to their self image.

Heinlein like and I mean that in the best possible way. Looking forward to more.

RyanBlackRyanBlackalmost 14 years ago
Really Enjoyed This

This is a great start to what Im sure will be a wonderful tale. Ill look forward to the next installment.

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