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by oolala

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I want more!

I liked the quick turn of your story, but I couldn't help but want to know more about the characters...I like your descriptions and your slutty word choice.

I like the mystery...of wanting more.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
pretty darned good

really well told! i wish, however, that you had explained everything a LIITLE more. other than that, A+!!

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