All Comments on 'Penny a Cuck Adventure'

Well written and I love eating pussy, so the detail in that was pretty hot. I just don't think I could take another man fucking my wife. I know the characters were all friends and talked each other down at the end, but still....

you might want to learn the use and purpose of the comma. Far too often, it completely changes the meaning of your writing when you don't use it properly.

I feel like this belongs in Loving Wives. The core of the story is about her doing another guy and cuckolding the husband. Nipple clamps and a comment about tying her up next time are not enough to make it BDSM for me.

I understand, but as it says in the intro, it is the first chapter introducing the path she took to the BDSM Please read the next two and I think you will be pleased.