All Comments on 'Pent-Up'

Welcome back! It’s been a long wait but so worth it.

Great story with a smart female voice and a very sexy and romantic interplay between the characters.

Really hope you have more stories to tell

Glad you've added another story, Bright Shiny!! Loved it!

I just gave away my 9th level 5 rating after a year on this site. I shouldn't have been too surprised, you have averaged 112 Followers per story when 10 per is the mark of a very good writer. Wonderful.

I can't believe your last story on here was EIGHT years ago! Do we have to wait that long again??

Too bad she fucked him BEFORE she broke up with her fiance. Admittedly, she wasn't happy with the guy and he didn't treat her like he should, but damn... to fuck his brother, at their family place? Cold shit right there.

Seriously, thank you for writing! Great story in first person, which usually never come off this well. Sorry I can give it only 5 stars, it deserves more.

Was Gary secretly with the cousin? Seemed like it might have ended up there...

Really would like see this continue

Loved it! You made it easy to feel her physical needs and desires and their emotions that led to a wonderful connection.

I’m so thrilled to read another one of your stories. Your first remains my favorite on this site; this one is also lovely. I hope you’ll write more.

This is a story with "how many licks to reach the center of a tootsie pop" energy. Too tasty to analyze properly. God I made such a mess.

Also, somehow incredibly sweet and vulnerable?

Thank you for writing again! Man your stories are amazing! Keep it coming!

Excellent! A worthy successor to your last story. Great pace, wonderful detail.

I'd love to see much more from you...ideally with less of a pause between postings ;)

I like Katie, that’s for sure. The final unprotected intercourse at the end was like a cherry on top!

Believable characters, superbly written and with pace, energy ... and loads of cum. Perfect story.

Could have ended better with her leaving that place and Mike while the bitch ex-fiance realises what happened

Hot story! Excellent writing and a huge turn on! Keep up the erotic works !

One of the best I've read. Being naked outdoors is a huge turn-on, and these 2 really enjoy it. Very hot!

A very real conflict. Some very hot sex. What else do you need? I wish Katie the best. Thanks for sharing!

Well-written, it would be nice to see what happens next. If somehow Gary tries for reconciliation and they have unprotected sex before realizing it was a mistake, then she ends up pregnant but isn’t sure if Gary or Mike is the father...

One of my favorites! Fantastic, emotional and visceral.

After almost a decade’s absence your writing comes to life again with a lovely story of personal rebirth! So very well done. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

“On the second day the thunderstorms started and it rained for three days straight. There was nowhere to go, and nothing to do, and the boredom was so concentrated I could taste it in the back of my throat.”

Superb writing. Thanks for sharing! 5 stars.