All Comments on 'Perchance to Dream Ch. 01'

I liked this, found it engaging. However there are WAY too many exclamations. If 3/4 of your story was done in bold type, then after a bit, bold doesn't mean anything anymore. The same goes with exclamation points. You have a couple of paragraphs where EVERY sentence ends in a screamer (exclamation point). It became annoying, especially because most of them were in appropriate. Limit exclamation points mostly to dialog, and even then, use them very carefully. I still liked it, though, and will ready further installments. I gave it a four. J.

Interesting story line. Very creative and imaginative. Keep it going....

This is an imaginative and well crafted story - I'd love to read more :-)

Nice story, and not just the erotic bits, there's an air of mystery, and a feeling that it should continue - pity that you didn't.

Nice story, full of mystery. I see it's entitled Chapter 01 - what happened to chapter 2? I'd really like to read more of this!

Please let there be more, this would be a good romance.