All Comments on 'Perdita's Pleasures Bk. 01 Ch. 04'

The chapters are not long enough, one just gets started into the story when you end the chapter, this interrupts the overall enjoyment of the story. The theme of the story is a good one.

I suspect your ratings would rise if your chapters weren't so short.

I agree that one page chapters don’t go down well with readers particularly if there isn’t an obvious conclusion which I think is the case here. The first three chapters could have been combined as one and you obviously had all of them written before submitting the first one with them being published within three days of each other. Then a gap of seventeen days to Ch.04 which would seem to indicate that you waited until after the first three were published before completing this chapter.

It’s unfortunate that so few readers leave a comment, not just for you but for all writers, because, good or foul, you can learn from them. I do like your writing.