Perfect Day

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"Shhh," Echo whispered. "It's over now."

Callie let out a long, wheezing whine, and reached up to grab Echo's arm. She couldn't catch her breath. After a minute, Echo slid out from behind her, and Callie rolled to lay flat on her back.

"It's over now," Echo said, smiling. "I'm here. It's okay."

Callie just stared at her out of the corner of her eye as she panted.

"Just breathe with me, okay? Breathe."

She nodded, and tried to make her chest rise and fall at the same pace as her friend, but the tremors still refused to subside. Under the covers, her hand found one of Echo's, and she squeezed it tightly.

"You're okay now." Echo trailed her nails along Callie's cheek, brushing back stray hairs. "That sounded bad. Do you remember what was happening?"

Callie just looked down, still trying to catch her breath.

After a minute of quiet, Echo whispered, "Was it about me?"

She hesitantly nodded, her eyes still averted.

Echo took a long, slow breath, and smiled sadly. "You've felt this way for a long time, huh?"

"Yeah," Callie croaked.

"I wish I could fix that," she said. "Go back in time and give younger me a hard shake. Look what's right in front of you, dummy."

Callie gave a hoarse laugh.

"I don't like that you were alone with that."

She didn't respond, but she did manage to finally meet Echo's warm gaze.

"I'm here now," she said, "and I'll pull you out of as many of those as I have to. Okay?"

"Will you still be here?" Callie blurted, her mind still thick with fog. "In the morning?"

"Yeah," the redhead replied. "I'm not going anywhere."

Callie nodded, and rolled into Echo's embrace. The redhead kissed her forehead, and Callie felt herself drifting back to sleep using her friend's arm as a pillow.

"You poor thing," she heard Echo whispering, as she floated back into the darkness. "Rest now. I'm here."

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Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai6435 months ago

So so good!

Yet another great story! Think this is the best yet! Just feels so good!

Thank you

Mushroom_ForestMushroom_Forestabout 1 year ago

Something I love about your stories is the sheer amount of feeling in them. They're thrilling, they're sometimes painful, and they're beautiful. This was really sweet and I very much enjoyed it.

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

This one didn't come together for me. Part was character definition and part was presentation. Just some notes below:

Impressions as I read along (not thought out at the end of reading):

Shy lesbian pining after clueless best friend is a rather tired premise.

Callie should just walk away from the whole bunch of losers and go find a real life, and never look back.

I really want to say that SURELY not all 19 year old guys are that cluelessly asshole. They make me cringe. Maybe that’s why I never, ever wanted to set foot at a high school reunion (and never did).

Though Callie is more than a bit of an asshole herself involving herself in getting drugs for a group of people she clearly dislikes. That’s very weak. That, too, is monumentally cringeworthy.

Oh. Even better. Her ex is her drug connection? Weak.

I don’t know … but if I was getting the first ever chance to make love to someone I had been in love with for years and was pretty sure I was never going to get the chance and wanted to do the very best for us together, I very much doubt the first thing I’d reach for it a strap-on. That’s so … artificial. And Callie’s first feeling at that point is that she’s very powerful?

Callie is unfortunately … a small character. And her new, first time ever straight girlfriend knows way more about lesbian sex that she does. She feels rather sad.

Nightmares? Seriously? Unless Callie can grow up and move forward fast, Echo will pass her and be gone before they even graduate university.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

That for sure is truly something, coming to terms with your best friend with the real best friend with this only best friend ...... The pain which would bubble to surfave then this would have been a backfire and so it was romance love friendship partnership ....... Lovely

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AwkwardMDAwkwardMDalmost 3 years agoAuthor

I had to look this up (it took a while). I've never read Percy Jackson, or seen the movie(s?), and this story is not fan fiction of that.

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