All Comments on 'Perfect Picture'

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CreeperclawCreeperclawover 4 years ago
Poor dude

If only he got a better ending. I kinda prefer stories where bullies get the tables turned on em.

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 4 years ago
Amazing!

That was tremendous, and very creative. Now we are left to wonder whether Snot... I mean, Scott... is left to spend the rest of his existence trapped inside the painting, worshiping three sets of stinky feet. Or whether he will manage to get out, only to end up as a permanent foot slave to Melanie and Rebecca. Sounds like a damned if he does and damned if he doesn't proposition. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome

You did a really nice job with the descriptions, this was great. Please write more like this, I'm a big fan. Would have liked more about his life as a slave to Lady Emily, maybe as an afterword or a sequel? Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next chapter

Please write a second chapter for this story. Would be really great to find out what happens to Scott next.

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