by Skippy47
If you have to hire a hooker to target and seduce the one you "love", you were done before you started
Can't imagine that what she said should have really hurt Tom...
A) Paul had likely had a lot of experience with women so him able to provide better sex means nothing... With the exception of *one* person in the whole world there's always *somebody* better at sex than any other person...
B) Paul *wasn't* a "perfect stranger"... he was a facsimile of a perfect stranger.
Have no sympathy for her. She knowingly choose Paul over Tom without even knowing (or even considering) if the sex would be any good.
Do you ever write stories where the guy come out on top? Every one of your I have read the guy is lucky to still have a little of his balls left.
Maybe cuda been a 5, but the last paragraph torched that. And BTW, WAY too predictable.
I wouldn't marry his ass anyway, for doing that. She does not need him in her life
As usual, I like it, it’s well written but the female gets off too lightly. I’d like to have heard about what hit her after it was revealed etc.
so she cheated by giving another man something her fiancé had to work months for then taunted him with her 'I won' smirk...in a lot of your stories the cheating woman comes out on top in a lot of ways, or the MC takes her back after she does something heinous enough that reconciliation would be impossible.
It's kinda frustrating
She could smirk at me all she wanted, I would know she'd never be able to hang her head high around me ever again, and also her friends were the absolute bullshit.