- Mature
- Perfect Timing
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Looking around at our family now, with my hubby by my side, I think sometimes things are just meant to be, if you're willing to accept that everything happens for a reason. Whether it's an alarm that didn't go off, mismatched shoes, or even a weird salad that helps draw you together during a storm.
All I know is that I've got everything I've ever wanted sitting around me in this room. And I'd go through it all over again if I had to, especially if I knew it would turn out as wonderful as this.
- COMMENTS
Morefuninthesunabout 1 hour agoI love reading your stories. The one thing I have noticed is that there is a wonderful story going and the ending seems a bit rushed. For instance, in this story Will came back and then proposed and got married and kids all within a few paragraphs whereas the two of them meeting took at least double that. It would have been nice to see their relationship develop through the work- life balance. Has coworkers treated her differently. What was their life like at the cabin. And so on.
Rapierwit24601over 1 year agoWell. . . This story developed rather like a Hallmark movie, but with sex.
Now, that’s usually an insulting comparison when I use it (and I use it often) but not intended as such here.
The plot tropes were predictable, but somehow the character development brought it to a higher level.
If someone can’t appreciate a good romance, does he even have a soul?
Anonymousover 2 years agoThe scene where they’re tasting the inedible salad had me laughing uncontrollably. Even now, a while after I first read it, just thinking about it makes me giggle a little. Unquestionably the funniest thing I’ve read on Lit. Great story. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
