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All Comments on 'Perfectly Imperfect Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely intriguing and I cannot wait to read more.

Paiger123Paiger123over 2 years ago

Super creepy so far 😀 Hoping it gets to the Romance part before he hurts her

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm hooked, so far, many possible forks in the road. A very interesting premise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very inriguing start to a nice story. Don't know where this os going yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I absolutely loved this. I felt a little cheated with only 1.5 pages. It is your first and it is glorious! You are a great storyteller. Please make a little longer.

- A greedy fan. :) (5 stars)

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I'm a hopeless romantic from a small town in the UK and I especially love the twisted and taboo! I love to write and share my fantasies with the world, and as always, I love to learn so please leave me honest feedback on anything I've written and I'll do my best to improve! ...

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