All Comments on 'Personal Shopper'

Perfect

A great story, but please do a proof read through to get rid of the several typos that detracted from it being a full 5* story

Could do without the crudeness from her boss.

Great story! I enjoyed it very much! Maybe a part two?

I enjoyed the story and I actually found it somewhat believable but I only awarded four stars due to the many irritating typos throughout the story. She shit me a wink was one such though that made me smile rather than annoy me. You really need to proofread your stories not just use a spellchecker. That said I did enjoy the concept and I will check out more of your stories.

So easy to submit, so sexy to read

You know I love it! I've been looking forward to more from you... And now I want even more!!!

Love the story and love your writing!!!

Good story and interesting, but there are too many “speed bumps” that the reader will need to stop and re-read with the correctt word. Really needs an editor.

Loved the story, but it could be so much better with a good editor.

This is a good premise and a good story. There are a lot of typos, however, and I think you would really benefit from the feedback of an editor or at least a proofreader. I hope you keep writing!

More detail would be devine.... you made my pussy come alive!! OMG I AM THROBBING....

Interesting story. Typos aside, you should have at least Miss Kelsey go the dildo route as either receiver or giver. You

Totally awesome!

Loved it for so many reasons. Good story and hot. Thank you.

Promised I’d read some. Love your style. Onto another one!

i wish they did personal shoppers like that OMG

Wow, what a great story! I don't normally read lez stories but this was super hot!