All Comments on 'Personal Trainer - Lydia Trains Zach Ch. 01-04'

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Harvey_DHarvey_Dabout 4 years ago

I think this is my new favourite story of all

Time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Glad you're back

Glad to see Escriterra is writing again - he's been a personal favorite for years!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Can not wait for the rest of the story-

devoutmalesubdevoutmalesubabout 4 years ago
Wow

Excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Brilliant

Love the story.

You’ve managed to build the suspense up brilliantly.

Can’t wait to find out what happens next.

Will she suggest taking some more photos to track progress, only this time fully naked?

Can’t wait!

ClarkbClarkbabout 4 years ago

Wow. A CFNM story on a whole other level. Sexy, titillating without going overboard, insightful, surprisingly believable for this genre, and some very talented writing. Not for everyone, but this is connoisseur level.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Patiently Waiting

Excellent so far! Love the build up. Checking often for more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

one of the best writers on the site. the tease is great, but i hope they get their hands on each other at some point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hooray! You're writing again!

I thought you'd given up.

So glad to see you've started writing again!

Best Author on Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It was a treat. I'll will come back and re-read it a few times. Thank you for the post.

DrizdartDrizdart4 months ago

Happy to have found the story ... and beginning to think about more time at the gym and maybe even finding a trainer there ...

Intrepid47Intrepid474 months ago

How many “stars” are there? I only saw 5 but I think it should be more.

This story was frustratingly slow and it was EXQUISITE!

I thoroughly enjoyed so much of the psychology within the characters,and both Lydia and Zach testing the edges without going too far with their veiled statements.

And Zach’s “research” was so excellent.

Perhaps at home I will try “You’re the boss!”

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