All Comments on 'Pete the Pirate Ch. 01'

A great start to a new series by a great author

This is a fun read.

I loved it - a lot.

I do enjoy your world building and creativity. I'm just disappointed by how short these series are lol

Really, really enjoyable story. Can hardly wait to read the rest of series.

I enjoyed the read, it's a strange world with an oddly disturbing start and a strangely fantastical lilt. I was a little disappointed with how little you dealt with Pete's discovery that he was missing so many original parts, I can understand that this worlds magic makes it feel like the prosthetics are part of him, but they really aren't and there should have been some kind of scene to deal with that trauma instead of, "Oh! New parts! Cool!".

Also, I don't think you mentioned clothes for Pete until "...Kuss handed me the bundle of clothes she was carrying under her arm...", and even then he didn't put them on, even though he'd been switching between short and 'normal' length legs with no regards to trouser length, so I assume he'd at least been naked from the waist down all along.

[WretchedMonkey] My assumption was that Kuss kept (and cleaned/repaired) his original clothes.

Interesting. It is fantasy and should be treated as such. Still, well thought out. Like your other stories, it starts out very strong.

Phenomenal story!!!

Great start.

So much creativity!