All Comments on 'Phillip & Michelle Ch. 03'

I wish I could give a better than 100 scoring for this chapter. Oh my god. That river scene was incredible. I have read it over and over again!

Amazing sensuality, just amazing. This is one of my favorite stories, and you are an amazing writer.

Any writer that refers to an orgasm as a little death ("le petite mort") is on the "A" list in my book. And mixing water images and genital lubrication took me over the edge like a barrel over a waterfall.

Love sex and foreplay in the water - that was a hot chapter - can't wait to reach the next chapter.