by History Nut
Loved the story...and what self control! I am impressed. The story was great!
I thought your story was terrific. If it really is a work of fiction than your imagining the scenario was brilliant.i have read other "true" storys simmilar to the theme of your work and they were so flawed by "overselling " the plausability of it happening that I was in a rush to get done with them. I was worrying that your story would end with you and the woman having a shag and jerry filming i. I urge you to write a sequel(there has to be more to the story)..I could just about see you getting a call sometime after Jerry ships from the Mrs. asking for your tech. help in (fill in the blank).great read!!
Being in the military and having been to Iraq I can relate to the couple. I only wish I was able to get my wife to agree to what they did. It would have made Iraq more bearable. Thanks for the story.
decide to do this. I have contemplated it for a while. It would have been wonderful if you had been so consumed and jacked off while you were filming it. I think this is amazingly erotic and you did a wonderful job bringing that to life.
I particularly appreciated your avoiding any cliched nonsense involving the photographer being invited to join in, ensuring the story stayed realistic.