All Comments on 'Photo Shoot'

Hot, sexy and erotic. Would benefit from some work on the flow of the story, which was a little disjointed at times, not helped by the typos/errors. It’s ‘chaise longue’, but thanks for avoiding chaise lounge which seems to be becoming ubiquitous. Keep writing and thanks.

Great story. I sure enjoyed it.

Very good, interesting plot line well done.