All Comments on 'Photo Studio Ch. 01'

Original storyline...good buildup...could maybe have added a further kink when being rescued that the lady rescuer partakes in naughtiness...but then it would have been a group thing hey....looking forward to the decorator cum fixer upper's role in things....keep it up(hahaha) looking fwd to further chapters...

I loved it! Helped me release some tension, if you know what I mean.

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I'm waiting for more chapters. This one was a real stroker for me

You're getting into a rut. Your story lines are very similar to each other

There are many ways this story could develop: Miranda, Debbie, the other models... Should be an interesting ride.

Maybe found a niche you like would be a better way of phrasing it - or even in a cycle right now lol. Using s similar style for a number of stories is not a bad thing - it can help refine an approach IMHO.

I like the start here it is clearly well organized and the outline fills in well - a good structure usually leads to a good story.

Basic male fantasy yes - problem ?? Nope - the stories are almost all totally plausible as presented so no issue there either -

Fantasy that could actually happen in RL - perfect !!

If he doesn't know what he was into, I think maybe he ought to read a little anatomy! What he got into goes by many names, I like "kitty."

Again you developed the plot and the characters to a hilt!

As for the attic segment, well done. That actually happened to me on a different scale but just as much fun. Way to go!

In every story this guy writes, the main guy in the story has a 9" dick and so big around the girls can't wrap their hands around it. Jeez! Give it a break. I'll bet that most people who read this tripe don't go along with this kind of overactive imagination.

The old guy