All Comments on 'Photo Studio Ch. 06'

Great story! Even though the situations push (but not completely exceed) credibility, your narrator is a real person, which adds verisimilitude to the story. I definitely want to read this again before I go to sleep, in hopes that the story can inspire some very good dreams.

One minor quibble: at registration, the room is identified as a Queen room, but when the bed-romping begins, the bed is described as a King.

I have one tentative suggestion: A bit more description of the other women in the boudoir and at the reception might not be amiss, although I think I would want to see the story with that added before I could be certain that doing so would not disrupt the narrative.

Terrific job, and better than your already high level. Bravo!

A very we'll constructed story with a good buil

I was very impressed with your story. It was very well told and as said in an earlier comment, very plausible. You did very well developing the characters as well as the entire story. I think the end of it could have gone on for a while with Scott and Tina, but you did leave it open for a great sequel or at least a continuation. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more or your work.

Really like this series but kinda weird since it feels like it's going a supernatural/weird powers route.