All Comments on 'Photography Bonding'

please continue. great start to a amazing story line

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Great start, enjoy the characters, like the direction. I appreciate that the protagonist keeps checking in to make sure this is what they want. I would recommend an editor for the next one. Some typos were distracting, and some grammar shifting will help it read more smoothly.

Loved the story, keep writing, and reach out to the community. You've got support and thanks for sharing your sexy art!

Good premise.

But seriously lacks details.

Three stars.

You write like a twelve year old with absolutely no knowledge or experience, go read some books and then get an editor

Nope nope nope…got a few paragraphs into page 1, too many typos, misspellings etc. No lit, intro like a poorly written resume. Might be erotic but there are way better choices on this site.

Feel free to delete this.

"What? But you have nothing to be ashamed [off], right?" Cathy looked at me waiting for confirmation.

When Ronda not feeling like being the center of attention anymore, she let go [off] the curtain and stepped out of the corner.

But I took these pics and got myself off in your [bad] at the thought of you doing so in the same place." she explained.