All Comments on 'Physical'

Great leadup, but give me more. I'd like you to detail the sex too, not just the 'taking control'. I like your style though. Nice work.

Needs to have a part two or at least a longer continuation of the sex scene. I dont really care for it abruptly ending. Although the rest was alright.

Yum, perfect!

I like the thought/say process. It works very, very well... The beginning could use work, but I find the end... Attractive... I've always disliked crappy endings, but this story avoids that, forcing you to make your own... I applaud you...

I agree so much about the ending of your story... it leaves you dying to know something, ANYTHING more! I had to run and get my vibrator so I could pound my own pussy into submission ;) First I went nice and slow for you then I finished out fucking myself hard. Thank you so much, archibael!

Its not a 5, its at least a ten. Short yet extremely powerful. Like they should be.