All Comments on 'Physical'

Its not a 5, its at least a ten. Short yet extremely powerful. Like they should be.

I agree so much about the ending of your story... it leaves you dying to know something, ANYTHING more! I had to run and get my vibrator so I could pound my own pussy into submission ;) First I went nice and slow for you then I finished out fucking myself hard. Thank you so much, archibael!

I like the thought/say process. It works very, very well... The beginning could use work, but I find the end... Attractive... I've always disliked crappy endings, but this story avoids that, forcing you to make your own... I applaud you...

Yum, perfect!

Needs to have a part two or at least a longer continuation of the sex scene. I dont really care for it abruptly ending. Although the rest was alright.

Great leadup, but give me more. I'd like you to detail the sex too, not just the 'taking control'. I like your style though. Nice work.