All Comments on 'Piano Player'

I liked the way you built the bar scene piece by piece, almost like a painting. Without dwelling on the obvious, you created a warm, leisurely atmosphere that blended beautifully into the coupling later on. The neat little conclusion was a special touch.

This was probably one of the best stories I've read in a while. Short and sweet with details vivid enough to paint a picture in my mind, erotic enough to get me hot, and the perfect last line to make this story truly romantic. Great job.

I adore stories like this where there is a twist ending. I really enjoyed the running commentary about the couple making out. The sex was hot and the ending amazing.

I enjoyed your story very much. I took the time to read some of your older stories and enjoyed them all very much.

Boyd