by mlektm50s
Nice and sexy. Unlike so many writers on here, you must actually proofread your stories.
Good detail and erotic. Well done and look forward to reading your future stories.
Beautifully seductive and erotic. Excellent writing and recount of a beautifully intimate experience.
Holy Moly. What an amazing story. I can't put into words how much I liked this story. Reminded me of when I was a kid and blah blah blah. I sure did enjoy this. Hope you keep writing more.