by DatingHollywood
I agree with the previous comment. Each story in the series is incomplete. It feels like a rough draft, not a finished story.
Could be a great story, decent writing. Needs to be laid out better and an editor.
Shows promise.
Still waiting for the third Chapter. Do Tay and James return to the Hilton Garden Inn or does she return to the bucking bull? Where does she want to go for her next ride?