All Comments on 'Pier Pressure'

Jimmy needs a late night visit from Bob and friend Billy Club.

Never understood why suck pathy writers even keep the comment part open? What do they expect really??

shit stories will get shit reviews?

Absurd in the extreme. I detest stories, whether real or fiction, that features a thoroughly selfish and contemptible character who destroys.

Well, shit happens every day. Most people are weak and ugly things makes them uglier. In the end the pain will be collateral.

A sad vignette about a weak aging twat.

Maybe two to three stars. Not my favorite brew.

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"Our marriage is great"...and she destroyed it easily for a cheap fuck...Another cheating whore was born...She will find herself living alone and miserable...Was it worth it? Was the other couple stupid enough to not understand they have fucked? They will have to clean the boat...1*

Just another poorly written story about a cheating, entitled cunt. I hope she gets divorced.

So when does the hubby find out that he is married to a slut and toss the whore to the curb

I realised I’d betrayed the man I loved…. So say cheating sluts everywhere

Seduced? The clown just grabs her and gives a few lines and she fucks him. Way too easy. He’ll be fucking her regularly because she’s a slut.

Definitely needs a part 2, the husband finds out.

Cheating cunt needs to go down hard.

Musta been some potent wine cause Jimmys move are pretty lackluster

Good story and definitely needs chapter 2. Hubby finds out and tosses her begging ass away. It also possible it comes out the other couple is complisint in helping him as they invite married neighbors knowing there hubby is away and only one other bedroom. That is why I alway said opportunity is the problem. The strongest marriages with the fists in for cheating saying I would never can be broken . That’s why so many at work place. With them often , become a friendly ear with flirting. The opportunity eventually will happen. A company party, drinks after work or work travel or all of the above . Men have a inner thong that attracts them to Woman who are taken . I’ve know plenty of guys like this who need to be put in his place instantly with consequences that my occur if he talks shut again . That may push him to another target. Many years ago when in late teens to early 20’s an former coworker would always try to fuck all his friends sisters, moms and girlfriends. He got off on it . He wasn’t quite about it but selective in who he told each time. In on case a nerdy kid from the town had a hot sister that he was fucking often and would brag that her ass was totally stretched to the shape of his cock . He then one time hit a jackpot with that same kids newly separated mom at a bar about 45 min away with a bunch of girlfriends out drinking. She was gonna take a cab but he was there and offered saying his friend canceled. We’ll half way they were in a motel and he fucked her every way possible. He even pissed on her in the shower . He even made he blow him driving down her street saying don’t worry it’s dark and as he shot his load told her she sucks a better dick than her daughter, she freaked and finally that may have sobered her a little. Well his bragging asshole mouth had the nerve son / brother who snapped and attacked him with a bat yo a broken knee than punched hi face breaking nose and jaw and wrist. He ended by kicking his balls repeatadly. Sick but true and all guys who seek a taken woman should get that revenge. This was for his mom and sis but his target was always the taken woman

I love BTB and “get even” stories. Yours, I hate. If you had carried it to its proper conclusion and the husband divorced her and ruined Jimmy, I would have given you more stars. I have been cheated on and I will never enjoy reading about two people who get away with it. I’ve read three of your stories and will not read any more. All deserved 1 star.

What the fuck was this?

DOL

At least somebody has a sense of humor, even if it is a bit twisted!!

1 star - Skanky bitch is going out to the curb.

No harm, no foul...

The narrative was really rough the first half of the story. Mostly it was simple, single point sentences. The flow smoothed out as the story went on, but it still happened from time to time. You really need some more training in composition. The plot is solid, just the implementation is lacking at times. 3*

Divorce

He didn’t use the chains!! Thanks for sharing!

Good tale of how she allowed herself to be seduced/screwed. Certainly before the series is complete, she'll find

herself truly fucked. We'll see. LP

Stupid woman, taken in by a predator. No doubt, he has video for blackmail.

There is a predator, and it's not the man. She is a deceitful cheating bitch, and like so many writers on this site, will make a fool of her husband now that she has cuckolded him. Isn't there a writer here that likes men?

God story about how a selfish woman's vile mind works

Another awful and dislikable plot.

Oh this could get into something dark by the look of it