All Comments on 'Pierced - A BDSM Fantasy'

Loved though the transitions were jarring a bit and required rereading a bit, if you decide to make this story into a multi chapter series i would love that.

Thanks for the feedback. It helps me get better. I am very new to this so I am learning as I go. I am not sure what I want to write next, but I am glad you enjoyed this story.

I want to say the subject was horrifying. I am eternally glad not to be involved in something like this ghastly ghoul party.

Hi ShadowRosie,

You are correct. The story was meant to shock. Some people find what horror is to film; BDSM is to porn. Some people love it, some people hate it. Different strokes, you might say.

I love this story. To me it was not shocking at all, quite tame actually. But like you said...different strokes ;)

I really do hope you will add a lot more chapters to this. I look forward to reading them.

Keep up the good work!