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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Terrific, and short

Gets right to the point, and fun to read. Tired of too-long stories, so this one was just what I needed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Three Times The Charm?

Three times this has been submitted (Gary Alexander and Gary Alexander 2, assuming they were all you), but never continued with Sue making good her promise to Clair. Hopefully, this time you will continue this narrative. Would be nice if Jennifer and Dani got a chance to make the pinata explode, too, since they helped get it ready in the first place.

jlarue1959jlarue1959over 5 years ago
Just damn hot!

Just damn hot! Definitely want to read about their further fun adventures ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That was short, hot and to the point.

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