All Comments on 'Our Secret Ch. 01: Pine Forest'

Awesome story. My wife loved it too.

Wow! 5/5

Fucking HOT, Loved it. I'm not really into father/daughter, more of a mother/son person, but this was damn hot.

Fun!

I love open relationships, no cheating.

As a man who fucked his sister for years, you know I'm gonna love these stories.

Excellent start! Keep it going

My kind of fantasy and story. It was really hot and I definitely would love you to continue as a series.

This story held my interest and I hope you will continue this story. I for one will give it a read.

Superb start to a new series :)

Love to hear about their fuck together. mmmm

Loved to read about their fun together....dad and daughters fun. Hot how him ate her Pussy

EXCELLENT!

Quite a different theme on camping , please continue . Never happened to me butt I can still dream !

The story was going good but the guy-guy thing was not. Definitely should be a tag so people can avoid it.

Really looking forward to part 2!!!

Absolutely love this story and hope part 2 arrives soon, (it reminds me a lot of another series, i think the island but chapter 2 of that went a bit off rails so im hoping this one doesnt do same)

I would love to hear more about how the couple got together, and how they told each other they both are having these special relationships on the side

Love it….yes, please write more….

5 tars. I'm waiting for more

Brilliant story. Very well written and with endless possibilities. Looking forward to the next episode. Thank you.

I loved this story, especially the incest. Please continue.

Very hot. Excellent plot. You need to develop plot on how they are all fucking each other.

5 stars

Great story, 5 stars.

Please continue. The family needs to visit Pine Forest.

Outstanding story, interested to see where you take it now.

One character down. Now to tell the other three, and see how they arrived at their... interests, and then maybe a last chapter to tie it all together? Lots of fun so far.

Thank you for a beautiful sexy story about love .. 🤗 😘

Great story really enjoyed it the author obviously has a good understanding of the business the father and daughter were in, authenticity and realism are important.

Very good. You are a good writer. I loved the voyeur aspect of watching other couples. Please keep going.

I really liked it. I think their family all ought to enjoy each other, like Jenny’s family. Regarding Pine Forest: they spent a day and a half there surveying and creating an estimate for electrical work. They have 5 employees? If they get the contract, the employees will have to go nude too. But honestly, Nudism is Comfortable, Relaxing. Natural, Wholesome, Fun, Sensual, and just feels good. Touching and sex is an added benefit.

Wonderful story. Can’t wait for more.

5-stars. You laid out the story perfectly. Looking forward to another few chapters. So many possibilities.

Loved the story....looking forward to more

Hot story, many more chapters please!

Fuck - this is hot, AF!

I am loving it so far. 5 stars! So many possibilities and directions to take this series in.

Great story. A multi part series is in their future. 😈

Very exciting story. First off it’s “Naturist” not “Naturalist”

I hope you also leave some women specially the older ones to have full natural pubic hair intact. Lots of readers still love hairy pussies specially for mature ones.

I gave this story 5 stars.

Would love to see women casually and carelessly spread their legs as they move around or getting up from from the pool or loungers giving men full display of their parted or gaping pussy lips.

A nice opening chapter. Looking forward to the next instalment to see how the family dynamic expands.