All Comments on 'Pink Juice'

I liked the story.

Plus I love it when a story ends and the writer puts "the end" to let you know it is finished.

I enjoyed that!

Any chance of a part 2?

I would like to sign up for testing please.

great story. loved the gradual descent into sissyhood for charlie. looking forward to whatever you have in the works next!

I really enjoyed the story. Ikd love to see more of your writing.

Great story. Hope to see more from you. Great length and style of writing. Thank you.

Very Unique! I felt sorry and thrilled for Charlie!

Excited and pissed for Charlie lol , I sure there's more coming soon!

Im adicted! I need more!!

Super good, but they didn't need to trick me. In today economy accomodation, food and dental would of been enough.

I enjoyed this very much. Very inventive.

There are several inconsistencies and other errors in the writing. You should consider making use of Literotica's free editing program.

great one, loved it

So intense! The hottest story I've read in a long while. It builds slowly, spiraling down down down into the pink. It's a tale of seduction, corruption, addiction. My only critique is I want more. Just like charlie, I want more Pink Juice..

What a FABULOUS story! Violet is the evil manipulative seductress I DREAM and ASPIRE to be! A true Goddess, in Her highest form! Well done, Kitten!

Unbelievable story. AMAZING. Truly...thank you!

Loved it! Charlie's little miss-adventure is hot and maybe even a bit familiar..? Great work LK!

amazing story a must read and get me 6 cans of pink juice asap im ready

Damn diabolical, powerful story! I would love to see Charlie "progress" to Bimbo's level! Thanks for a great read!

An excellent story which scratches my chemically-induced, matriarchal authoritarian erotica itch. Please continue.

damn i wish there was more

You are a talented writer with a wonderfully twisted point of view. This is as nice a bit of erotic horror as I've read in a while: no tentacles going in NSFW places, no succubi attacking our hero, only a poor schlub who may or may not deserve his fate. The writing pace perfectly matches his unravelling situation. Well done!