All Comments on 'Pitcher of Lemonade'

This one left me cold.

It seems that the author believes that you can take just any old thing and make a story out of it. I guess that sometimes it works. This time it did not.

you have become a fool

Hey - I liked it a lot! Can we get a part 2?

Being older and a former farm girl, I can relate. My Mommy used to make me dresses and blouses from old flour sacks, too.

We had an old John Deere tractor I used to ride on with Dad on the drawbar behind to the fields, but only when he wasn't towing.

No cheating, just good fun and apparently she shared the story with her husband which made it even better- a shared time.

fuck'em. Good story. Different with no revenge and no getting pissed at the wife for flashing her tits and ass.

Very nice character development. These are likable and understandable people. Nice believable scenes. Well done.

Perfect! This story I thought was very original. I had a fun time reading it.

Being around country or farm people a lot of my life I could relate to this story and have seen some similar things from some of the women I have had the pleasure to meet around my country acreage and cabin.

You wrote some of the mannerisms and attitudes very well!

Thanks for writing!

If you add chapters PLEASE let her maintain her self control - they are happy together the way it is and they both get some kicks and have some fun and everyone gets a peek - let it stay good -

Some stories with good people who know how to control themselves is good -

for a wife......men only ever think with their pricks and not their brains...she is just another cock teasing skank slut whore.....one day she will get raped and wonder why...women are such controlling sluts...don't you just hate them....

Sound's like a wonderful wife to me.

A very enjoyable story even though it just drifted and lacked a climax. Hope Norman had a quick recovery.