All Comments on 'Pixie in the Car'

by NotWise

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WisloggerWisloggerover 4 years ago
Well done

"watched his nostrils flare" seems an odd line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good job of writing from female POV!

Excellent writing as always. You've captured your female character nicely. Love this series. Another paw-print endorsement. C.

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I'm a soon-to-be-retired planning consultant living in the US southwest. For those wondering about my "Unlikely Angels" story, Thank you for reading, voting and commenting on the story. I'm glad that many of you enjoyed it, but I removed it from Literotica after I made the "b...